Looking back on my first assignment (earliest memory), I found my language to be rather limited. The flow was clunky. It was hard to actually get engaged. On top of that, it was entirely from my own recollection, partly because nobody else in my family would remember it, and partly because I didn’t feel like asking anyone. Rewriting now would probably have me show the memory as a precursor to another event, to allow more depth. There’s not actually much more for me to say. It’s pretty standard revisions.